Train Poem by Peggy Pollock

Train

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There’s a train that leads to miles away,
It’s a special train, It leaves today.
You’ve looked it up and booked it
Bought your seat,
Invested
You’ve planned your trip
The time you’ll spend
The time you’ll spend away.

It leaves at ten o’clock today.

It’s a special train that leaves today
You’ve looked it up and booked it.
Bought your seat,
Invested.
But all the same, your special train
it angry engine will not wait.

And the timing you’ve neglected

And though you’ve planned the time you’ll spend
Upon your train away.
The special train for which you’ve paid,
the train, it left today.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Tehrani 25 January 2012

A fun catchy poem depicting an interesting original meaning into investing our time into something. One i feel most of us can relate to, as who hasnt missed their train before? Thanks for sharing

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Sara Tehrani 25 January 2012

Such a fun catchy and clever poem. I like how deep you have expressed the meanings of investing your time into something. Full of character and one I think many of us can relate to as who hasnt missed their train before? :)

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Dave Walker 25 January 2012

Great poem, really like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, An Angel Cries.

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Anthony Goodall 25 January 2012

Very well written with a nice message.

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