A searing pain deep in his chest
And crimson all around,
The once magnificent warrior
Now lies still upon the ground;
A single shaft within his grasp
Has done the awful deed -
A piercing blade has cleft the heart
And left him there to bleed;
With clouding eyes and ragged breath
A chill cuts to the bone,
Although the sun rides high above,
His body turns to stone;
No feeling now but wonder
At the broken man below -
A hollowed-out reflection
Of someone he used to know,
Awareness of a blinding light
Through eyes that cannot see -
A voice so sweetly beckoning,
'Come now my son to me';
A feeling of contentment,
Of serenity and love
Surrounds the mighty warrior
As he lingers high above
The fading once proud body....................
'You must come now, my son -
This battle has been finished,
There are new wars to be won.'
Reminiscent of Arnold's Sohrab and Rustum, and the Resurrection of course. Very powerful imagery and ideas, and, as always, a highly poetic compostion. Superb. xx jim
The spirit of the warrior may never get to rest? Nice this. Danny.
Very nice, Linda... I like the subject and the flow of your words very much in this poem. I found it to be intriguing. Thanks, dan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That would be composition in case anyone has other ideas! ! xx jim