Trapped Poem by Umbre MoonOkami

Trapped

Rating: 5.0


Life can be harmless
And life can be great
But life right now
Is hard to contain

I try to hold in
My unusual thoughts
That grind against
My mind

I try to find a place
Where I belong
But its hard to find

So you see me
Know I disappear
For no place to go
I cry you hear

I can be
A person with
My own personality

No matter how
Hard I try
The words are demissed

The feelings are
Washed away
From me once more

No matter
How hard I try
I fall to pieces

No matter
What life says
I will always
Be trapped inside

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Masaomi Tezuka 11 May 2011

I love it and it speaks the truth for some of us who dont kno how to express ourselves. Thank you for sharing......

0 0 Reply
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success