Tin Mouse


Trapped - Poem by Tin Mouse

Life can be harmless
And life can be great
But life right now
Is hard to contain

I try to hold in
My unusual thoughts
That grind against
My mind

I try to find a place
Where I belong
But its hard to find

So you see me
Know I disappear
For no place to go
I cry you hear

I can be
A person with
My own personality

No matter how
Hard I try
The words are demissed

The feelings are
Washed away
From me once more

No matter
How hard I try
I fall to pieces

No matter
What life says
I will always
Be trapped inside


Comments about Trapped by Tin Mouse

  • Mariko Amaeda (5/11/2011 12:45:00 PM)


    I love it and it speaks the truth for some of us who dont kno how to express ourselves. Thank you for sharing...... (Report) Reply

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  • (5/11/2011 11:53:00 AM)


    Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery.
    Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, November 14, 2011


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