Saturday, October 3, 2009

Treacherous Sip Comments

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so suddenly silence called.
he in stampede was running,
as if it burnt.
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Maria Barbara Korynt
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Milica Franchi De Luri 03 October 2009

That treacherous sip has driven many alcoholics and their families in destruction. Nice poem, well balanced................ Thank you

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