True Love Poem by Ashley Patrick

True Love

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Find someone whose:
Arms will hold you at your weakest,
Eyes will see you at your ugliest,
And a heart that will love you at your worst.
After you have found that then you have found
True Love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tobias Gray 25 February 2010

and this is how it should be!

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Raj Nandy 22 February 2010

ASHLEY, There is an old saying that a true friend is one who is ready to accept his friend despite all his imperfections! So what you say is TRUE! But generally during dating we are at our best! Things begin to surface only after marriage! Good and thoughtful write! Keep writing! -Raj

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John Oconnell 18 February 2010

child very very profound and true. john

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John Knight 18 February 2010

Wow Ashley - This is beautiful for your first poem on PH. It is so true in respect of TRUE LOVE. It is when we are WEAK - WEEPY and feel WORTHLESS that we really really need someone to love us. Someone who loves us as we are when we are at our worst - is the person we want to spend our life with. Thanks for sharing a poem straight form your heart. Love in Poetry - JOHN.

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Ashley Patrick

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