Saturday, February 21, 2015

True Love Comments

Rating: 4.7

It's been some time since we had our first lunch
I knew we'd be lovers, it was more than a hunch
From the second you walked through the door
My heart skipped a beat, you're who I adore
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Mary Rodriguez
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Jaishree Nair 14 March 2017

The pangs of love deeply defined in each line..superb choice of vocabulary and it brings out the beauty of the theme.....Loved reading .

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Howard Savage 02 January 2016

True Love is formidable to obtain. good poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 January 2016

a very fine poem, great expressions, you have a honest heart and very sincere. poem is elegant. thank you. like your poems very much. thank you. tony

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Hannington Mumo 12 November 2015

A well-expressed outpouring from the inner chambers of your loving heart. The length and rhyme scheme of this composition is in itself evidence that it was written from an honest heart. It takes real talent and patient skill to produce a magnum opus of this profound length...Kudos!

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Chinedu Dike 10 August 2015

Piece of great elegance, well articulated and insightfully penned from heart with conviction. A beautiful love poem with lovely rhyme scheme. Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly. Thanks for sharing Mary. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ibrahym Oba 21 February 2015

Brilliant... Well penned. You're a good poet

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