It's been some time since we had our first lunch
I knew we'd be lovers, it was more than a hunch
From the second you walked through the door
My heart skipped a beat, you're who I adore
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a very fine poem, great expressions, you have a honest heart and very sincere. poem is elegant. thank you. like your poems very much. thank you. tony
A well-expressed outpouring from the inner chambers of your loving heart. The length and rhyme scheme of this composition is in itself evidence that it was written from an honest heart. It takes real talent and patient skill to produce a magnum opus of this profound length...Kudos!
Piece of great elegance, well articulated and insightfully penned from heart with conviction. A beautiful love poem with lovely rhyme scheme. Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly. Thanks for sharing Mary. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
The pangs of love deeply defined in each line..superb choice of vocabulary and it brings out the beauty of the theme.....Loved reading .