Jonny Brackney

Rookie (September 26th,1988 / Louisville, Kentucky)

Truly Satisfied - Poem by Jonny Brackney

I lay in the salty
water.
smile softly.
laugh like a child.
warm liquid
carries me away
drowning all worries
and doubts.
as the sun begins to set,
father stands
on the shore nearby
building a castle of sand.
i love him.
i love everything.
kiss me, sun.
kiss me.


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  • (5/19/2012 5:13:00 AM)


    I like this very much.I think many of us have memories like this and this poem summarises them really well.

    It has a clear, almost 'oriental' (i.e. Zen) feel to it.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2011


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