Jonny Brackney

Louisville, Kentucky
Jonny Brackney
Louisville, Kentucky

Dirty Eyes

Rating: 4.8
sometimes i feel the devil
and his dirty eyes
haunting me.
taunting me.
burning me alive...
inviting me to fall
into a comfortable numb.
but in that numb
a hatred dwells, smirking in the shadows.
i shrug him off and
move along
pretend he isn't there.
my inner madness spills into a
thin black ink.
so you can read
what your eyes
would never
while i sit
grinding teeth,
spitting thoughts from my fingers.
hurting and feeling.
living with
Tuesday, December 13, 2011
Riza Braholli 20 June 2018
sometimes i feel the devil and his dirty eyes watching. we have felt this way so far. the poem has. the poetry has many beautiful figures
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Babatunde Aremu 11 February 2014
Well- penned. Temptation begins with eyes and is executed with the heart. Great moral lesson. Bravo!
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Gajanan Mishra 11 February 2013
living with myself. The great thought. I like it.
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Hardik Vaidya 11 February 2013
You have got the gut of the poem out and garnished it with the strut of your felt reality. What an intense experience, reading it. Wow.
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Stevens Cadet 22 February 2012
Wow. I feel you on this one. Temptation is our greatest demon and many times evil things seem the most pleasant. Nice piece
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Sara Fielder 13 February 2012
Omg! ...and I mean that in a good way.
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Silentpoet Grl 11 January 2012
.....really great poem!
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