Trusted Poem by val legend

Trusted

Rating: 5.0


I used to call u my brother
non other was sweeter
every time things got bitter
u made it better...

yet u made me sour
u left me with a sore
u said u're sorry
believe me its quite funny
u said u wish I could understand
I never would coz now alone I stand...

funny how those who evoke
so much love in us
could also invoke
the exact opposite
u taught me how to love
u taught me how to hate
guess u're the perfect teacher...

because of u
I don't knw how to let anyone in
I find it hard to trust
not only me,
but everyone around me...

I learnt the hard way
picked up a scar along d way
shud av known better than to lean on u
I fell xo hard
now am just a shard
I'll never be whole again
every night I relive the pain...

thought u were my angel
thought u could do no wrong
thought u were incapable of betrayal
but I guess its true
even angels have their wicked schemes...



by val legend📝
inspired by feeyen👌🏻

Sunday, November 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: hate,betrayal,love,trust
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
inspired by a friend
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2015

Wonderful and expressive sharing of thoughts.

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Musawir Raakh 08 November 2015

Don't be hopeless, blood is thicker than water, loved the way you indicated at brother's love, I invite you to read and rate mine

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