neurotic i am
she said twice
and twitched
terrible twists in
my mind tie to
anxiety
trying trying trying she
said thrice to tame
the tense
take deep breathes
she told the girl
who operates her mind
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like this.The repetitions and the overall feel of edginess is well done in a few words and only four stanzas.And anyone who gets the word thrice into a poem is pretty ok with me. However i suspect her trying didnt have a happy outcome.