Trying For Absolute Poem by Writer Poet Lover

Trying For Absolute



they say that we are meant to last
and how i used to laugh.
i thought that we were far too young
and would never find my match.

But now i see it a different way,
the way i always will.
you are mine and i am yours
until i breathe my last.

though god my take my life from here
this cruel place we live
he'll never take the love we share
in the beautiful land of our own.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Candice Anderson 25 November 2008

Wow! I didnt know someone could sound so sweet and kind and still be so cold hearted! Take that back u dont have a heart theres a big black whole in place of it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

0 0 Reply
(: God's Wild Child :) 01 November 2008

ok now tell me cuz im a little confused, u said until u breathe ur last right? well r u dead? cuz u seem alive to me, and second do u like liying? just wondering.

0 0 Reply
Ian Singer 16 September 2008

dude this poem is you best that i have read

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success