Tsk Tsk, Task Nearly Thwarted Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Tsk Tsk, Task Nearly Thwarted

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Mary Lou Sims was young and enterprising, like stars routing dark;
Or mauve dawn on the verge of discovery, awaiting time's remarks.

Mary Lou's best friend was Cora Mann, ever since sweet childhood;
When they'd sat in zesty school together, in the town of 'Wildwood.'

They dreamed of opening an antique shop, like an old rose garden;
Awash in butterscotch sun's long memory, scents roaming, wanton.

Other friends visited Mary Lou frequently, like frilly clouds visit sun;
Avid for frothy, plum memories, like formal moon, beyond the fallen.

Family favored Mary Lou with visits, on flowering Fridays of her life;
As raspberry filled a backdrop of days, and plumed flocks were rife.

She lived in the house of tasks and haste, like pink stars, ever shining;
Or butterflies laboring in flowers, near the place of wisteria, climbing.

Striped scarlet seized colorful dawn, on a street of transient starlings;
Where sassy Mary Lou resided, when ravens spread their dark wings..

And neon hues lit noisy nightfall, when nomad neighbors came calling;
In now moments of now and then, when time notably, stops crawling.

'Elephant foot' plants shook earth, while swan flowers glided, moonlit.
Then 'mermaid plants' dove at dusk, as weeping begonias cried a bit.

'Sorceress blue rose' bewitched all, as jade spiral cacti dizzily twirled;
And 'curly locks orchid, ' combed her tresses, under starlight, pearled.

Mary Lou and Cora, were closer to their dream. A loan was approved;
And Mary Lou wrote a note to friend, Cora, like colors of joy, suffused.

Mary Lou gathered other letters to be mailed, and also the one to Cora,
With joyful news of the rest of their lives, like mulberry skies of aurora.

She toted and mailed the letters, using a basket, of yellow and green;
Yet, with no word from Cora, worried she was having doubts. Unseen!

But, elation returned when a boy rang her bell, with the letter she'd lost,
For, some acts of kindness are so great, that you could not place a cost!

'A-tisket a-tasket
A green and yellow basket
I wrote a letter to my friend
And on the way I dropped it,
I dropped it, I dropped it,
And on the way I dropped it.
A little boy he picked it up
And put it in his pocket.'

Tsk Tsk, Task Nearly Thwarted
Friday, January 24, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood,dream,fantasy,happiness,lost,plants,work
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This story is based upon the nursery rhyme called, 'A Tisket, A Tasket.' Photo courtesy of Deborah Hudson at Pixabay
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 January 2025

A beautiful poem of life, friendship and dreams with a lovely title. Wonderfully written adorned with great rhyme, rhythm and great images.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 27 January 2025

I enjoy creating stories behind the nursery rhymes. Thank you for your lovely comment.

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