Tum Prem Ka Deep Jalao Comments

Tum prem ka deep jalae rakhna, Main chnda ban kar aaoon ga, Gar chandr grahan ki raina hui, Main swem chanda ban jaoon ga. Aandhi aaye ya pawan chale, Yeh deep na bujhne dena kabhi, Meri rah pe tikaye rakhna priye, Aankhein na bhatakne dena kabji. Yeh deep agar jo bujhne lage, Tum apna aap jala dena, IIs prem mein kitni shakti hy, Sansar ko sare bata dena, Jis ganga mein rakh bahegi teri, Main dooboon ga us Ganga mein, Sangam to hamara hona hay, Lekin phirbhi main ro doon ga. This poem was written in only 2 or 3 minutes just after reading your lovely poem, it may contain some errors, you are a great poet, you may revise it.