victoria mbali

Rookie (Port Elizabeth)

Turned Down - Poem by victoria mbali

Just when I thought
I see the light
Big block of bricks builds up in front of me

Just when I thought
yeah, I'm going
I see my path
The path folds up right in front of me

Just when I thought
I'm flapping my wings and flying
My air bag blows up, flying down I go

Why can't things turn up sometimes?

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  • (2/10/2010 10:01:00 AM)


    I beileve that all these quesions you ask yourself will be answered as you continue to climb this mountain of self exploration...good write. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 6, 2010



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