Turned To Slush Poem by Sheila Knowles

Turned To Slush

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snow has turned to slush
a new year's
knocking on the door

I've wrapped up all my failures
and planned my resolutions

once again
setting my wishes
upon the heavy branch
of fall

so I'll hang on
to rusted customs
where I find
the sense of comfort

you never could
deliver

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uriah Hamilton 27 December 2005

I like the idea of packing all my failures and the line about hanging them on fall's branch, always good work.

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