Saturday, August 9, 2014

Twilight Day Comments

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The morn casts a shadow on my mind
this twilight day of dark clouds
I mourn everything lying dead behind.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 12 August 2014

A cloudy dawn makes our mind overcast with regrets and longings! We think of the wasted years! But as the day clears, our minds too brighten up and we feel happy and excited that we are alive! Nothing else counts! Great write!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 August 2014

Yes this life is a God's gift, we keep on living keeping in mind our daily activities and we succeed sometimes and we fail sometimes so instead of regretting we should keep moving...................an excellent write

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Lorraine Colon 09 August 2014

Life is a wonderful gift by itself, even if we haven't done everything right. Hindsight is always 20/20, but regrets serve no purpose. Be aware of each and every day from now on and make the best of it. Great poem.

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