Thursday, February 16, 2006

Two California Parks In Early Spring Comments

Rating: 3.3

I. Concord Skateboard Park

Sheltered in this smooth, round,
concrete nest of dips and curves,
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Linda Ori 18 June 2006

Max - a beautiful and peaceful write. Like lying in the grass with closed eyes and just being aware of the sounds that engulf you. Very visual but also very musical to the ear. Thanks for the vacation! Linda

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Gina Onyemaechi 16 February 2006

I love the happy, celebratory tone of this poem, Maxy. Happy you! Have a 9 for singing so jolly! Warmly, Gina.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 16 February 2006

Very nice Max, you took me there!

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