Two Minds Poem by Andrew Degen

Two Minds

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Two minds
to one soul
confusion reigns upon them
thoughts
come and go as the two become one
the souls tear
the two torture it
as it cowers in fear
the path is blocked
no way out
he who controls them
has not won
but neither have I

As I realize my future
a puppet
in a show
nothing more will become of me
my hopes lost
my fears ceased
as death creeps near

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 04 February 2008

thats really good i love how you wrote that poem its like me only im not a guy hehe great job

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Andrew Degen

Andrew Degen

Spokane, Washington
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