Alisha Castle

Silver Star - 3,174 Points (05/01/1993)

Two Years - Poem by Alisha Castle

It's been so long and lone,
It's been two years since you gone.
An empty vessel with crowdy past,
Turned the gold into golden dust.

A crowdy road with unheard voice,
The sweetest melody sounds like noise.
Word halts more than twice,
Sun goes down yet to pay price.

It's been so long and lone,
Day begins with an awful dawn.
Birds are noisy, Sun causes burn,
Lost more than twice that you made earn.

It's been two years....

Topic(s) of this poem: break up, love, sad love

Form: ABC


Comments about Two Years by Alisha Castle

  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (1/30/2020 1:16:00 PM)

    Write comment. Such a nice poem, Alisha Castle. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks (Report)Reply

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  • C. P. Sharma (12/17/2018 6:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful use of oxymoron to paint the contrast. (Report)Reply

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (12/8/2018 12:09:00 AM)

    a very sad poem since he has gone but god one a nice poem kindly read my MOMS SMILES PLEASE thanx in advance (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 6, 2018



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