U See The Seas In Me Poem by edlyne lucas

U See The Seas In Me

Rating: 2.5


im an inspiration
a word, time cant erase what i feel for u
its like a new born day that doesnt turn into dust
i must say my road to a narrow ending is lost forever
it is not found forever


we contimplate love like a word not a passion
its also not a fashion for you to wear but for you to
dress your life into
these jazz blues of the sorrow-ful songs we sing
god blessed each and every one of us with things but we tend to throw it away thats how love is


like a rough sea in the sees that we sea in us
we
me
u
altogether




edlyne lucas aka angel demascus

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dowell Oba 25 October 2008

Babygirl you must be a rap queen, cos I really feel d beats and flow in this one. Luv u a.k.a angel damascus!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 09 October 2008

its like a new born day that doesnt turn into dust.............love seems to be curved as the art of colors, yet luscious red of scarlet glow, wonderful write by imagery,10+, thanks for sharing

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