edlyne lucas

Rookie (29 january / addington hospital durban south africa)

U See The Seas In Me - Poem by edlyne lucas

im an inspiration
a word, time cant erase what i feel for u
its like a new born day that doesnt turn into dust
i must say my road to a narrow ending is lost forever
it is not found forever


we contimplate love like a word not a passion
its also not a fashion for you to wear but for you to
dress your life into
these jazz blues of the sorrow-ful songs we sing
god blessed each and every one of us with things but we tend to throw it away thats how love is


like a rough sea in the sees that we sea in us
we
me
u
altogether




edlyne lucas aka angel demascus


Comments about U See The Seas In Me by edlyne lucas

  • Dowell Oba (10/25/2008 3:27:00 AM)

    Babygirl you must be a rap queen, cos I really feel d beats and flow in this one. Luv u a.k.a angel damascus! (Report)Reply

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (10/9/2008 4:49:00 AM)

    its like a new born day that doesnt turn into dust.............love seems to be curved as the art of colors, yet luscious red of scarlet glow, wonderful write by imagery,10+, thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 3, 2008



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