Neelapu Suresh

Rookie - 297 Points (Andhra Pradesh, India)

Un-Aware - Poem by Neelapu Suresh

My heart loves you so much but you are unaware about it
why my heart can't express this love you are unaware of

My eyes has you in it, my dreams have you in it, only you
you are in my memories, in my promises and in my every breath

Feelings of such had never enterd my heart before
My eyes met you in such a way that i lost all my senses while being conscious

An unknown intoxication has taken over me

And this is what my breath repeats saying

I should be thankful to this life
worship you and think of you as my soul

My heart loves you so much but you are unaware about it

Topic(s) of this poem: love, love and life

Form: ABC


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A person's first love, which he's afraid to express.

Comments about Un-Aware by Neelapu Suresh

  • Terry Craddock (12/4/2015 11:41:00 PM)


    'My heart loves you so much but you are unaware about it' unrequited love, themes so much of human experience, memories we all share, thankfully not to the degree which plagued Edgar Alan Poe, but the emotions make memorable reading (Report) Reply

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  • Mantu Mahakul (12/4/2015 11:37:00 PM)


    Heart loves so much. Very interesting sharing done definitely.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 4, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, September 16, 2016


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