Sunday, September 13, 2009

Un Homme Comments

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I would wish for a man
To love me, maybe,
Without laughter or contempt
Of my years…
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Dosvedanya Rashia
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Marieta Maglas 18 October 2009

nice rational abstract poem, nice portrait for an ideal man, thank you for sharing this poem............10++++

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ata khan 14 September 2009

A beautiful wish Keighly, very eloquent. I really enjoyed reading your poem, a sure ten, thanks

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 13 September 2009

C'est tres joli, the title is in French, believe it or not, with that title the poem became more masculine.

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Tamara - Hanaring 13 September 2009

A touching warm poem dear..I do feel your wish..i judst wish you will find what you seek....

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Eyan Desir 13 September 2009

Good luck getting that man good write

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Hazem Al Jaber 13 September 2009

warm softy beautiful feelings seeks fot its desires.. This poem is amazing, a truly beautiful creation. Keep it up! ! ! It is really very touching………….God bless sweet poet yours, .. hazem al..

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Dosvedanya Rashia

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