Uncertain Poem by Louise Melliza

Uncertain

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Life is fair
Because it is unfair
Life is short
But is it really short?

We row in the river of life
Thinking we could have it all
In the journey of the sea
We lost ourselves

In the garden of Eden
He chose the most beautiful ones
The unpleasant ones are left alone
The choice is always His

The sky is trembling
And The wind howls
Heaven couldn't wait for you
So go on, go home

Wednesday, November 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 10 March 2018

Well conceived and nicely brought forth with conviction. A good creation. Thanks for sharing Louise and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Louise. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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