Uncertainty Poem by josephine lee

Uncertainty

Rating: 4.5


Intimacy is unavoidable when two people fall in love
From kissing, hugging to petting
This what people do when they fall in love
So why i there this feeling of UNCERTAINTY
Uncertain if this is all right
Kissing, hugging to petting
Uncertain if what we do is acceptable or not
Uncertain in all things & nothing
Love seem so simple & yet complicated

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 02 September 2008

I think because we all know of hurt and are affraid of getting it again. Well done

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I think we have all wondered this at times, and your poetic phrasing of it is eloquent. My own suspicion is that without uncertainty there is complicity. t x

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james Xane 30 August 2008

'ts only complicated when there's room for doubt. when u have faith and trust then there's no uncertainty. good poem by the way. keep it up.

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