devika isabella pathu

Uncombed Memoirs - Poem by devika isabella pathu

I traveled on uncombed reminiscences
for ever and a day
it rains with the sun silent out.
We had wrecked our ship
by steering it into an island,
far down on the verge of earth.

We walked away
Leaving it bleeding
As the woods were on fire,
All we had left was a lost rain

Comments about Uncombed Memoirs by devika isabella pathu

  • Jazib Kamalvi (10/18/2017 3:55:00 AM)

    A sublime start with a nice poem, Devika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/21/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    thank you Lu corner and tiku for your read and comments. thanks again

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (4/20/2013 2:22:00 AM)

    very nice.a philosophical drop.liked it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 2, 2013

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