Under The Rainbow Poem by Byepolar Bayer

Under The Rainbow

Rating: 5.0


In the moment the shutter opens
the tragic mask stands out;
though maybe it's only for me:
it’s the one that catches my eye,

and in that instant: brotherhood;
I know that place; it’s a bolted gate,
against a state of grace;
and I'm at home in their regret.

It’s a tolling bell that summons
wry smiles that queue from here
all the way to somewhere looking down
on all the good that might have been,

reflected in a shadowed window
gently closed on impossible promise.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 31 March 2018

A nice imagination of haunting.... Well penned.... Deserves 10 +++ Naila

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Marieta Maglas 18 November 2009

the tragic mask stands out nice meditative poem 10

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Callie Carroll 26 September 2009

Ahhh, a night for haunting images, 'the shutter opened' and 'a shadowed window.' The gate may have been bolted, but you have been 'graced' with words.

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