Fallen Poem by Leigh Parham

Fallen

Rating: 4.0

Fallen

somewhere along the way

between the witty retorts

to the bitchy remarks

my heart sank

When the glasses are taken off

I'm immobilized

blue eyes

six-foot frame

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 08 September 2023

This COULD use a little more 'meat'/content, but I like it. 3-4 stars. OK. 4 : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 08 September 2023

Take two Aspirin and call me in the morning. Interesting, ...of course MY eyes are kind of blue. IS HE....ME? ? ? No, as I'm only about 5' 10'. Rats! ! ! bri : )

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