Unfaithful Me…! ! ! Poem by Ali Ahmed

Unfaithful Me…! ! !

Rating: 5.0


My honey, ma sugar, my worthy gem
Never left me alone until the very end
Without you ma life is real fake
Not even a single step I can take
Bcoz on each step, whenever I fall
Always you grab me from other side of the wall
Covering me always from this world’s horrendous blaze
By putting urself in ma very own place
Pulled out the thorns from ma barren rusty being
Wakeup in the nights to confer me your own dreams
I can never return that love I have taken from you
But till the end I will not stop loving you
You are ma light, ma life, ma everything
The joys, the happiness always you bring
And ME? Just made your life a real hell
Not left a single one, so you can even tell
Where I was? When you took away ma hurdles
Not even stopped you and give you the guilt bundles
What just I had done
Opt a simple way to run
Shame on me, to hurt you ma friend
Please forgive me for my dire offense…! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Mccudden 13 February 2009

love this love the way you use you own slang i can relate to this and that is important like in Scotland wee kin say things that others find hard to understand so nae bother wee manknow whit i meen lol a 10 from me well done

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sumaira .....ir 13 February 2009

ali u r soooooooooooooo deep in love with her hmmmmmmmmmm wonderful wite my frnd LOVE U :)) 10/10 AS ALWAYS A+ POEM

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Jake Erkens 13 February 2009

Very creative and interesting. Nice slang, though I would prefer that you'd write out the whole word instead of just writing abbreviations. That's a little tip of mine. :) Good job! Wolfkens

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