Who We Are…? ? ? Poem by Ali Ahmed

Who We Are…? ? ?

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Feared I am for who we are?
What we do and what’s our glory?
Think for a while
Then lost the whole story
Derailed from the tracks
Searching often for the cracks
Is this what we are here for?
Selling ourselves at everyone’s door
Listen to no ones advice
Using perfectly our very wrong rights
Snatching smiles from poor & hungry’s
To fulfill our desires without no worries
Stick in our backs, so become proud
For high necks in a no ones crowd
What we are doing with ourselves?
Burning our lives before going to hells
At least we should think of who we are
Before we can lost ourselves so far
Because the end of us is real spiteful
Begging today can heal our sinful

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sayz LFlynn 07 March 2009

blunt and to the point, i like that,10++

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ata khan 07 March 2009

No brother you have not lost any track Keep the good work going Thanks a lot for writing and sharing 10+

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Naidz Ladia 06 March 2009

'Listen to no ones advice Using perfectly our very wrong rights'....these lines are very nice....i will say, by these 2 lines, we already know who we are..... naizz

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