Unfinished Poem by Hannah Ramirez

Unfinished



Once upon a time
I met this guy
Whose shimmering eyes
makes me shy
Whenever he looks at me
I automatically squirm
And because of that melting gaze
I can't stand firm

Yet my hopes and dreams vanished
like what you did
I never knew that it will happen indeed
Every night while looking at the night sky,
I always wish
That you still wonder about me
even though you left me with tears.

Tuesday, April 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Herbert Poetry 15 August 2014

Beautiful and loving poem

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Boitumelo Oliphant 29 April 2014

nice one, could not help but smile as I was reading your poem hey

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Brian Jani 29 April 2014

This is a great poem, please check out my poems

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