Unfold Poem by chantel shoats

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i may have told you i lik you so much
and i still think of the last i felt your touch.
over and over i replay in my mind
the day i lost you and the day i'll find
not only you but me in my heart!
i try to keep it together when it all falls apart.
i try not to fall asleep knowing you'll be there
holding me close and watching you care
for not only me but for you and your soul
in my dreams watching me and you unfold.
if my dreams are my future then my future is you.
lay down, close my eyes and sleep is all i care to do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Godspower Oshodin 18 November 2008

i really like your rhyming scheme in this one, it's a beautiful piece! keep up the good work

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