Sree Abhinayaa


Universe The Amazing. - Poem by Sree Abhinayaa

Universe is so beautiful
With stars!
And with Solar system!

Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars
Oh! very nice
The inner planets.

Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune
The outer planets and gas giants.

So beautiful the Universe
Including the Solar system.

The sun so much hot
Sweating!

And sun's scared Hindus sound
OM! OM! OM!
Astonished by NASA
Which is ancient mystic sound of Hindus.

How amazing and beautiful is Universe is it?

Topic(s) of this poem: sun


Comments about Universe The Amazing. by Sree Abhinayaa

  • David Wood (9/12/2015 5:23:00 AM)


    Not a bad start, the universe is truly amazing. I invite you to read my poem Cosmic Dawn which is about the creation of the universe. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 12, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 12, 2015


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