Unlingered Thirst Comments

My camel drank a whole the river water as i sipped some droping drops our thirst quenched life rejuvenated as we jubilated and we are back on our feet again. like your poem very much.... was it ur imagination or were u really with a camel in the desert? thank u. dev

Under a blistering dessert sun my camel and i stand alone a mirage of lake drags our tired feet long seeming real, As illusions are very few metres the lake shifts further till we reach finally a water hole i bask in the euphoria of wellnes - - - - - A beautiful write about love which wipes away life's suffering by its lovely touch.Thank you for sharing.

A sublime start with a nice poem, Alaghde. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

Lovely poem and it talk more about nature...