Saturday, July 23, 2005

Unseen Culprit Comments

Rating: 3.8

You, the unseen culprit.
You excite me and give me hope.

Wiggling, bouncing my bobber as I peer from the
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clayton rize
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Poetry Hound 24 July 2005

Nice one Clayton. We don't get the full picture until the last line. Nice.

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RoJa Mitchell 23 July 2005

i like it, keep writting, and tell me when you do. :)

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