Unseen Culprit Poem by clayton rize

Unseen Culprit

Rating: 3.8


You, the unseen culprit.
You excite me and give me hope.

Wiggling, bouncing my bobber as I peer from the
sanctuary of my boat.

Come closer I urge - take a detailed look.
You swimming Houdini that strip my hook.

Saturday, July 23, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: swimming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetry Hound 24 July 2005

Nice one Clayton. We don't get the full picture until the last line. Nice.

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RoJa Mitchell 23 July 2005

i like it, keep writting, and tell me when you do. :)

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