clayton rize

Unseen Culprit - Poem by clayton rize

You, the unseen culprit.
You excite me and give me hope.

Wiggling, bouncing my bobber as I peer from the
sanctuary of my boat.

Come closer I urge - take a detailed look.
You swimming Houdini that strip my hook.

Comments about Unseen Culprit by clayton rize

  • (7/24/2005 8:43:00 AM)

    Nice one Clayton. We don't get the full picture until the last line. Nice. (Report) Reply

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  • (7/23/2005 10:45:00 PM)

    i like it, keep writting, and tell me when you do. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 23, 2005

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 24, 2005

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