Unspoken Poem by Fasika Ayalew

Unspoken

Rating: 4.5


In silence we heard
The whisper of our heart
The beat of our veins
The melody of our spirits
In silence we felt
The strength of our being
The ruggedness of our feelings
Our mouth sealed,
But we spoke thousands
As we dive into the ocean of silence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

You say 'I am who I am. For who I am I dont have a definition...'. And your unspoken Silence in your poetry it is what it is...Yet, without speaking it speaks a lot, it speaks a thousand. Thanks, young fellow-poet. I give you 9 but soon you will reach the level of 10. Keep on writing in this style. Dive into the ocean of Poetry.. And thanks for sharing your wonderful pictures...speaking..though unspoken! ! Joseph S. Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) ILP awarded

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