Silence Of Silence Poem by Fasika Ayalew

Silence Of Silence

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Mystic beauty
endless pleasure
filled with eternity
cascade like a fall
pour its waters
into a valley of calmness
\when listening to the silence of silence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 13 January 2016

Yes mystic beauty is always filled with eternity. valley of calmness and the great silence. are you a mystic poet? very fine thoughts you have given us here in this poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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C. P. Sharma 12 November 2008

Fasika, your silence is more powerful than an epic. I am reminded of Wordswort: '...breaking the silence of the seas Among the farthest Hebrides'

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Dereje Amera 21 October 2008

'Mystic beauty' is beautiful and deep expression of silence intoned by your great pen. Well penned poem. CONGRATULATIONS

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Alfredo Jacques 07 June 2007

I love the feeling of this poem, you have a wonderful way of writing thank you again for sharing.

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Mary Naylor 01 July 2006

This poem is filled with peace and beauty and hauntingly lovely imagery. I think you are very talented. It is not easy to bring an abstract idea to life. Your metaphor comes to life in the imagination.

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