Unstoppable Travels Poem by Smoky Hoss

Unstoppable Travels

Rating: 5.0


In the room read
All alone;
Books and poems
Becoming Home -
Beyond the door
Resides things tearing away pieces of me,
Only unattainable dreams
Of where I might be.

If a way out there
I myself am unable to find,
I shall freely travel with great joy
Along beautiful backroads and timeless trails
Of my own unchangeable mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 11 June 2011

I really really love the first part; it says so many things that I have found difficult to put into words, but you certainly had no such trouble! :)

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Juan Olivarez 09 June 2011

I am sorry I have not been around lately this new system they installed really had me ticked off. However I guess they fixed the problem, anyway Smokey this is a great poem, the greatest escapism in the world is to read a book. I gave it a ten.

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