Untamed Emotion Poem by Millicent Aguilar

Untamed Emotion

Rating: 5.0


He was in love with her back then
'til someone came
That merely changed everything
His love, devotion and loyalty to her


He left with no explanation
On her knees
She's broken
Tears falling
Eyes swollen
Feels like blown apart
Heart left into pieces
Scattered into places
Wounded, tormented
Uttering "Boy, My love for you was real".

Tuesday, November 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,heartache,pain
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Croix Sakurai 04 December 2018

Super relate me [/3: (

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Millicent Loren Aguilar 04 December 2018

Thank you po :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 November 2018

Millicent, such a well expressed poem. So touching...........10+++++++++++++

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Millicent Loren 30 November 2018

Thank you so much :)

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Chinedu Dike 20 November 2018

Heartfelt poem with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Millicent.

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Millicent Loren 30 November 2018

Thank you so much :) I'm gonna visit your poems too.... soon :)

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