Untethering Comments

let the moonlight come with the alone love silently- nice to read you

Gives me something to reflect on!

***** (those are five stars) bri ;)

(cont.) ...THEN I reread and 'only' caught my eye, and I thought: 'great! ' 'this is great stuff'. NOW, if only you could squeeze in (OR out) some humor and , the poem would be PERFECT.

(cont.) ...I'd best/better finish reading the poem. btw: welcome to PH, 'new poet'! your last line: When I first read it I 'missed' the 'only' and had to wonder, 'huh? '. (conl.)

i 'LOVE' this line: 'no matter the phase it's in', Having been, myself, married 4 times (3 divorces....so far, I THINK I understand your meaning, but...(cont.)