lean punio

Rookie (oct,01,1990 / sta cruz, laguna, philippines)

Until Forever - Poem by lean punio

My life had been monotone for a years;
There were good times but mostly there were tears.
I'm so weak and flaccid- my scream no one hears;
I've lived a vaude ville- a masquerade of fears.

Till your song echoed within my heart;
It seems like my life traversed a new start.
Colors filled my world which used to be dark;
Finally, it seems I've found my luck.

'You'll always be the one I say, ' I say;
Together we will travels love away.
I hope from me no one takes away;
Surely, my colored tapestry would turn to gray.

In my life you've made a distinct mark;
You've made me whole and owned my heart.
My feelings for you will remain true and steadfast;
Until dome comes and I breath my last.


Comments about Until Forever by lean punio

  • (12/13/2009 10:45:00 PM)


    sincere.. honest... heartfelt emotions! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/11/2009 11:04:00 PM)


    =) love this..its beautiful. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 11, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, December 18, 2009


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