Until My Last Breath Poem by Priya Kapoor

Until My Last Breath

Rating: 5.0


Your eyes, words and mischievousness,
Your innocent half smile to me,
Your killer glance towards me,
Never shall I forget
Until my last breath.

Your sudden turning away from me,
Your change in attitude towards me,
Your hand that abandoned me,
Never shall I forget
Until my last breath.

Your silly anger at small issues,
Your sweet childish behavior,
Your jealousy when I talk about other guys,
Always will I love
Until my last breath.

Your false vows and promises,
Your ego during each instance,
Your silence which seemed you'll never speak again,
Always I will hate
Until my last breath.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose 22 January 2013

its nice how u arranged ur work... U started wt d start of d relationship d next line u talked bout d end of it,3rd line u wrote d good time and d last line d bad... I can sense emotion runin deep... Its a great work... And i lov it. I also feel it wat u felt wen u wrote diz... Mayb cos many of us hav been in dat road too... Read mine too... U myt jus lik some. Its nice readin ur poem and gettin to knw u.

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Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose 22 January 2013

its nice how u arranged ur work... U started wt d start of d relationship d next line u talked bout d end of it,3rd line u wrote d good time and d last line d bad... I can sense emotion runin deep... Its a great work... And i lov it. I also feel it wat u felt wen u wrote diz... Mayb cos many of us hav been in dat road too... Read mine too... U myt jus lik some

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Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose 22 January 2013

its nice how u arranged ur work... U started wt d start of d relationship d next line u talked bout d end of it,3rd line u wrote d good time and d last line d bad... I can sense emotion runin deep... Its a great work... And i lov it. I also feel it wat u felt wen u wrote diz... Mayb cos many of us hav been in dat road too... Read mine too... U myt jus lik some

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