Untitled 1 Poem by Moon Fairy

Untitled 1

Rating: 5.0


an end so unlike the beginning
cried my heart out while i was laughing
flickered and died before my very eyes
cold flame burning fuelled by lies
so near yet so beyond my grasp
what i could've kept and made to last

it happened achingly on its own
the way night comes when day is done

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moon Fairy 18 October 2011

thanks <3 i really appreciate your comments. though i write mostly for myself...its good to know that some people can appreciate my writings :)

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Ency Bearis 18 October 2011

Impressive poem, a remarkable introspection.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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