Untitled Poem by Eoghan Finn

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With respect to the banal
Or matters less trivial.
The time spent wishing
Sat under a tree-
Still, like air,
That smothers proverbial
Places to go
And people to see,

Passing in hours,
Rushing in sequins,
Catching the arm
Of a chair. At the table
Sitting in silence,
Waiting and waiting
To find that you really
And truly are able.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 20 April 2007

Some fine imagery here, 'rushing in sequins' especially, brevity and deliberate choice of simple words works well to support your refined introspection. Rgds, Ivan

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Eoghan Finn

Eoghan Finn

Dublin, Ireland
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