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I feel the darkness all around
as i lay here dying on the ground
its getting closer enveloping me
can no-one hear me scream? ! ?
suddenly i see your face
how are you too in this place?
but i realize its just a dream
nobody has heard me scream
i see no light
its as black as the night
im binded by my dying fate
my life is covered by a concrete slate
if i die laying here
supressed by this one fear
the suffocation has taken hold
the pain the suffering these feelings are old
i've felt all of this before
as i lay dying on my own floor
but one though occurs
that thought is you
if you lose me.. what will you do?
i want you to live
unlike me
i want you to be happy
-justin white
How sad and hopeless, this piece. I nearly felt like I couldn't breath as I read it. If that was your intention, you did a brilliant job of making it happen. Good going!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i feel the same way you do for i never had that someone before but now that i have found that someone i to think as i lay there in the darkness 'what will happen to him for i want him to live to be happy'