Friday, April 27, 2007

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I feel the darkness all around
as i lay here dying on the ground
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Anita Blake 27 April 2007

i feel the same way you do for i never had that someone before but now that i have found that someone i to think as i lay there in the darkness 'what will happen to him for i want him to live to be happy'

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... Sheila 27 April 2007

How sad and hopeless, this piece. I nearly felt like I couldn't breath as I read it. If that was your intention, you did a brilliant job of making it happen. Good going!

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Madly In Love 27 April 2007

Beautiful poem Justin keep writing

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