Up In Fumes Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Up In Fumes

Rating: 5.0


Latterly skies blazed
after gold riches were lost
mourned by seas of blooms
exuding heady perfumes
Scarlet sun has gone down slow

Up In Fumes
Monday, June 5, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: sunset,colors,senses,goodbye,beautiful,flowers
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is in the tanka form.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 06 June 2023

Excellent tanka, it brought vivid imagery to me. Full STARS

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Your kind words are very valued.

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