Friday, September 16, 2005

Upside Down Love 987 Comments

Rating: 5.0

I felt giant with feeling,
puzzled and out of place,
like a empty vessel with out
engine, and a baggage ticket
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Ruby Root 19 July 2006

Hi David, great poem, I can relate to this too. I guess I am in the wrong mood to read your poetry. I feel the same way. Excellent poem, It is heart felt. Take care.

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Mary Nagy 17 September 2005

Your poems always seem to be somewhat cryptic to me........yet, their point is usually clear somehow. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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Allan James Saywell 17 September 2005

almost flawless poetry david very pleasing for you and the people who read it Warm regards AJS

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 16 September 2005

Very Nice Poem David. Liked ' You and me looking like spectators..'. Thank you.

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