I felt giant with feeling,
puzzled and out of place,
like a empty vessel with out
engine, and a baggage ticket
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Your poems always seem to be somewhat cryptic to me........yet, their point is usually clear somehow. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary
almost flawless poetry david very pleasing for you and the people who read it Warm regards AJS
Very Nice Poem David. Liked ' You and me looking like spectators..'. Thank you.
Hi David, great poem, I can relate to this too. I guess I am in the wrong mood to read your poetry. I feel the same way. Excellent poem, It is heart felt. Take care.