User Poem by Bleeding Willow

User

Rating: 5.0


you used me i think?
i still hold that question to this day
all the things of what we had, could of had, did have,
you gave up while i still tried
i tried to make things better
but then you turned on me
then u changed me
you made me a person im not
u lied to me
you used me i think?
i dont know why i still hold that question
but its true
your not the person i thought u were
i stuck up for u
i tried to do things for u
i even tried to be friends with ur parents
but in the end that was all a lie right? huh david to use me like a toy to totally change howi am to do things to me to cause drama in my life! ? its ur fault the scares get worse because its people like u out in the world that are curel!
But dont worry the pain will subside

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Steven Dart 28 October 2011

Youre SO young. Take charge of your heart NOW. Dont focus on the negatives of relationships that ended. Look for all the good that oocured. OWN your choices and become aware of the signs you missed along the way. This will put you in charge of your life not them. Never be used (or be a user) Remember people always tell you exactly who they are. We just think if we love them enough they will change for us. Not usually true.

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Romeo Della Valle 27 October 2011

Outburst of the heart! A vivid expression of an ODD LOVE filtered through touching sad write and which also shows clearly your great feelings and poetic talent! At your age, you have a long way to go and a precious goal to reach. The time is always right to bury the painful past and courageously move on! We all go through that stage of life and find the way to survive and change course in our lives. A well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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